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kuda ([personal profile] kuda) wrote2009-07-21 02:31 pm

Words of Love - Prompt is Moon


Title: Words of Love
Pairing: Buffy/Spike
Summary: Buffy has issues.
Rating: G
Setting: Season Six
Word Count:100
Disclaimer: All characters belong to Joss Whedon,
               Mutant Enemy, and lots of others-sadly not to me.
Beta: None so all mistakes are mine

~*~

The light from the Moon flowed through the tiny crypt window.

Buffy watched him lying on top of the sarcophagus next to her.

How peaceful and young he looked in sleep.

She wished she had the words to tell him how she felt.

Spike never had a problem telling her his feelings.

Words seem to flow from him while they froze in her throat.

Every time she admitted that she loved a man, he left her.

Her father, Angel, Riley and even Giles left her.

“I love you, Spike” would never cross her lips.

No matter how true they were.

[identity profile] spikes-evilbint.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Bloody hell, woman - that is awesome! I love this line especially.

Words seem to flow from him while they froze in her throat.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thanks. Just my feelings on why Buffy could never admit her real feelings.

[identity profile] larabeckinsale.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
That's beautiful, really captures Buffy in S6

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/woman_of_/ 2009-07-21 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice!

[identity profile] whichclothes.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
That's perfect!

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Buffy was really messed up in Season Six so she couldn't be honest with any of her feelings. Thanks.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. There was a lot of subtext with Buffy and emotions in Season Six.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Are you still in Canada? Enjoy the cooler weather. It's way too hot here in TX.

[identity profile] whichclothes.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep. Canadian until Saturday, and then Oregon for a week. It's way too hot back home, too. This is absolutely perfect here.

[identity profile] spikes-evilbint.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
As ever you get so much in so few words :D
debris4spike: (Spuffy - "love")

[personal profile] debris4spike 2009-07-21 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful, as ever - and I hope that it was true!
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[identity profile] moscow-watcher.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww... So true.

[identity profile] spikesdeb.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh now THAT explains everything! It's the way I'm dealing with it from now on :)

[identity profile] all-choseny.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
This was so beautiful and eloquently written. I'm gonna save this to memories.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
I think it might very well be true. Buffy lost each man who was important to her after she opened herself up to them. Thanks.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, I think it was in the back of her mind that if she admitted to her feelings bad things happened.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
LOL, I so glad you agree. Thanks.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Can't tell you how pleased it makes me that you would like it this much. Thanks.

[identity profile] lifefailsme.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 06:38 am (UTC)(link)
Ahh that is very believable and I really enjoyed it!

[identity profile] blackoberst.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, so much in so few words. Great work! It really moved me.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. So I am not totally evol? LOL.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 11:39 am (UTC)(link)
What a lovely comment. Thank you.

[identity profile] divadea.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
sigh...
Lovely!

[identity profile] lifefailsme.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Not at all, you are way too nice to be evol (completely anyway) :p

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I have my moments of evol. Believe me, I do.

[identity profile] ssddgr.livejournal.com 2009-07-23 09:04 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwww :( So beautiful and sad!

Loved it!
*huggles*

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2009-07-23 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
ouch poor buffy

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, sweetie. Happy it touched you.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-24 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Issues, this girl had issues. Thanks for commenting.